Poem About Language
Posted on: 27 Sep, 2008|Comments: 4|Views: 1009|Likes: 1| INT
I thought this was funny
Windows is Shutting Down by Clive James
The Guardian, Saturday April 30 2005
Windows is shutting down, and grammar are
On their last leg. So what am we to do?
A letter of complaint go just so far,
Proving the only one in step are you.
Better, perhaps, to simply let it goes.
A sentence have to be screwed pretty bad
Before they gets to where you doesnt knows
The meaning what it must of meant to had.
The meteor have hit. Extinction spread,
But evolution do not stop for that.
A mutant languages rise from the dead
And all them rules is suddenly old hat.
Too bad for we, us what has had so long
The best seat from the only game in town.
But there it am, and whom can say its wrong?
Those are the break. Windows is shutting down.
Submitted by Auntcat on 29 Sep, 2008 11:17 PM GMT
Yes, I love Kay Ryan's work. For me she represents something patient...The lonely poet who works at refining her words for years and slowly captures the world's attention
Patience
by Kay Ryan
Patience is
wider than one
once envisioned,
with ribbons
of rivers
and distant
ranges and
tasks undertaken
and finished
with modest
relish by
natives in their
native dress.
Who would
have guessed
it possible
that waiting
is sustainable?
a place with
its own harvests.
Or that in
time's fullness
the diamonds
of patience
couldn't be
distinguished
from the genuine
in brilliance
or hardness.
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Submitted by Paulmeier on 29 Sep, 2008 12:45 PM GMT
The poem from The Guardian made me think how much more tolerant we are of Shakespeare's adventures with language. He was not afraid to try new things with language, and of course, his experiments now define correctness. Isn't that odd? I suppose we should only ask for language to be vivid and meaning clear. But I still want my students to know the difference between its and it's etc. Where is the boundary between experimental and creative language and language that is simply incorrect? Perhaps that's for poets to tell us.
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Submitted by Kirsten on 28 Sep, 2008 04:21 PM GMT
I also thought this was funny. Do you know Kay ryan's work? She
is a Marin poet and new poet laureate. She often takes cliches and
turns them inside-out in her poems.
Patience
by Kay Ryan
Patience is
wider than one
once envisioned,
with ribbons
of rivers
and distant
ranges and
tasks undertaken
and finished
with modest
relish by
natives in their
native dress.
Who would
have guessed
it possible
that waiting
is sustainable—
a place with
its own harvests.
Or that in
time's fullness
the diamonds
of patience
couldn't be
distinguished
from the genuine
in brilliance
or hardness.
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