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Unbearable Love
Posted on: 13 Mar, 2009 06:24 PM GMT
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The unwritten thoughts
Unsaid they leave a mark
Not in paper but in heart...
The unspoken words
Lay too heavy inside
Can anything help lighten?
Unbearable love yet borne
So considered bearable?
Heaving sigh the only outlet...
Love can be painful, hurtful
Yet cherished and treasured
As swallowed lumps in throats...
Not a spark seen outside
Nor a word spoken outside
But a huge volcano boiling within...
Wrongly expressed love
Can it be read rightly?
Not one tear, not one sound...
Shhhh..............................
Too much noise, Silence Please!
Forgot to add: Smile Please:)
"I want you to smile always!"
Submitted by Kavita on 17 Mar, 2009 03:46 PM GMT
Really Goms.... This poem was very well written and the depth of emotion came through very well... Great job!!
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Submitted by Gomathi on 16 Mar, 2009 04:35 AM GMT
I love it. You dig deep, yet you end on such a light note. Wish
I could write like that. It's no wonder you like poetry, you are a
poet. Keem them coming!
Thanks Vanessa:) This poem has earned me the first recognition to acknowledge that I am a poet. Great reward, hahaha:))))))))))))
I am very amateurish in writing, but love to read and write:)) Thanks for your encouragement.
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Submitted by Vanessa1 on 15 Mar, 2009 10:23 PM GMT
I love it. You dig deep, yet you end on such a light note. Wish I could write like that. It's no wonder you like poetry, you are a poet. Keem them coming!
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Submitted by Timewarp16 on 13 Mar, 2009 07:22 PM GMT
Just now I read your blog on Dormancy. Your English is truly above standard. My gut feeling is that you can definitely give more standard poems.
Waiting to read...Just say 'click' and tick the thoughts, you
are sure to find poems.
Thank you! :) Hopefully I will start writing poems soon.
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Submitted by Gomathi on 13 Mar, 2009 07:11 PM GMT
Its truly heart warming
Keep rocking
Love
Gayatri
Thanks Gayatri:) I am happy that you liked this poem:)
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Submitted by Gayatri on 13 Mar, 2009 07:05 PM GMT
Its truly heart warming
Keep rocking
Love
Gayatri
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Submitted by Gomathi on 13 Mar, 2009 07:01 PM GMT
Ah! I need that inspiration to write poems. Hopefully I'l write
soon. :)
Just now I read your blog on Dormancy. Your English is truly above standard. My gut feeling is that you can definitely give more standard poems.
Waiting to read...Just say 'click' and tick the thoughts, you are sure to find poems.
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Submitted by Timewarp16 on 13 Mar, 2009 06:52 PM GMT
Thanks Timewarp:) It had been a long time to see you in
Englishcafe. Welcome Back!Glad you liked it. Why don't you try
posting poems yourself? :))
Ah! I need that inspiration to write poems. Hopefully I'l write soon. :)
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Submitted by Gomathi on 13 Mar, 2009 06:41 PM GMT
Nice rhyme and meter :) A nice read.
Thanks Timewarp:) It had been a long time to see you in Englishcafe. Welcome Back!Glad you liked it. Why don't you try posting poems yourself? :))
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Submitted by Timewarp16 on 13 Mar, 2009 06:26 PM GMT
Nice rhyme and meter :) A nice read.
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